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Is this acceptable for an RPG dialogue? No need to consider their personalities.
Title: Slimes
Chloe: Sheesh, I can’t see why my spear attacks aren’t working on these Slimes. I hate them all!
Kate: Then, try a fire attack—they’re quite vulnerable to fire.
Chloe: Oh, I’ve learned the fire skill, Blazing Thrust. It can deal critical damage as well.
Is this acceptable for an RPG dialogue? No need to consider their personalities.
Title: Slimes
Chloe: Sheesh, I can’t see why my spear attacks aren’t working on these Slimes. I hate them all!
Kate: Then, try a fire attack—they’re quite vulnerable to fire.
Chloe: Oh, I’ve learned the fire skill, Blazing Thrust. It can deal critical damage as well.
Title: Slimes
Chloe: Sheesh, I can’t see why my spear attacks aren’t working on these Slimes. I hate them all!
Kate: Then, try a fire attack—they’re quite vulnerable to fire.
Chloe: Oh, I’ve learned the fire skill, Blazing Thrust. It can deal critical damage as well.
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Chloe: Sheesh, I don't know why my spear attacks aren’t working on these Slimes. I hate them all!
Kate: Try a fire attack—they’re quite vulnerable to fire.
Chloe: Oh, I’ve already learned the fire skill Blazing Thrust. It can deal critical damage too.
That sounds a little more natural. Your characters talk a bit formally. 👍
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Chloe: Sheesh, I don't know why my spear attacks aren’t working on these Slimes. I hate them all!
Kate: Try a fire attack—they’re quite vulnerable to fire.
Chloe: Oh, I’ve already learned the fire skill Blazing Thrust. It can deal critical damage too.
That sounds a little more natural. Your characters talk a bit formally. 👍
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Thank you for refining! The original one sounds casual? I’d like to make a dialogue in a casual way.
Thank you for refining! The original one sounds casual? I’d like to make a dialogue in a casual way.
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@Aoki_Games The original one sounds kinda formal. "I can't see why" and "as well" are a bit formal. That's why I replaced it with "I don't know why" and "too." If you want Kate to be casual too, you can replace "quite" with "really."
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